Wednesday 25 June 2014

Literacy Dash - Kaylee


2 comments:

  1. Great work Kaylee, do you like writing?
    This is a really cool piece of work,
    Do you think reading helps you with your vocab?
    I like how you used some really good words, and you used a font that is easy to see. I like how you also added the picture :)
    Rebekah
    Ross Intermediate

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  2. Hey Kaylee :)
    I like the way you set up the page with the photo, text that you can read and your name, room and school at the bottom. ;) I really like the bit, as i sit here, frozen in amazing. I like your writing how you used present tense. Do you think this is one of your best pieces of work ?
    Zanthy
    Ross Intermediate

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