Wednesday 26 March 2014

Factual, Descriptive and Thought sentences

Murray Gadd came to school and he taught the teachers at Ross about teaching writing.

Check out Jenna's "Factual, Descriptive and Thought" sentences:


Factual: There are two men wearing white T - shirts.

Descriptive: The men are both looking in a tiny gap on the old, worn out, brown deck.


Thought: "Oh no am I ever going to find my wife's ring"?


What 3 sentences would you write for this photo?

1 comment:

  1. Factual: There are two men looking down.
    Descriptive: The men both are searching for something down the dirty, neglected, gap in the damp deck.

    Thought "I knew that playing cards on a deck was a dumb idea"!


    Louise,
    Ross Intermediate,
    Palmerston North,
    New Zealand.

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